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It seems you've run into a bit of a programming error. Not sure why there's a letterbox and why that letterbox doesn't properly serve as a border. I suggest adding a dynamic camera (or vcam as some people like to call it.)

But that aside, overall for your first submission there's nothing particularly bad here, your humor is reminiscent of classic Looney Tunes-esque cartoons, which is always welcome. But you could have done more. Perhaps animated the tree a bit- have it shake or bend slightly when it's hit- or at least provide a sound effect to make it clear that it was in fact hit and not just a piece of clipart on the screen.

Adding sound in general would help this as a whole. But overall, this is a good effort- especially for a first upload here, and ESPECIALLY considering many people just start off with submitting barely watchable one on one stick figure fights.

I look forward to seeing more from you.

Stop. Dear GOD what are you doing?!

Step 1. Rip Madness sprites, a series that has become the Newgrounds equivalent to beating a dead horse, with a cinder block until it is no longer recognizable as anything other than a red pile of incoherent mush.

Step 2. Animate about 8-16 frames of animation, which loops, showing the hands move in a circular motion and the rest of the character following suit.

This could be replicated by anyone, and even calling it a parody is a bit of a stretch. What exactly are you parodying here, and how is there any humor in swapping the sprites to an ungodly overly used meme?

Just, just stop animating Madness. If you are talented with animation, Madness is a terrible way to express it because you're just rehashing a style of animation that was run into the ground about a half of a decade before you signed up. If your heart cannot take coming up with an original series and Madness is the only way to unleash your animation prowess- at least stop spamming the portal with garbage that you and I know both took you a grand total of 35 minutes to slap together and publish.

I cannot judge your animation skill based on this, there is hardly anything to review. But even after this, I know you are capable of more- Madness related or not.

I'm not going to hold your hand here, because that's the only way you can learn. GoAnimate is basically Newgrounds' equivalent to those horrible Xtranormal videos that died off in 2009 or so.

But this is bad even by GoAnimate standards. This isn't even Xtranormal bad, more complex animation could have been made in Windows Movie Maker. Hell, even Powerpoint.
Nothing is animated, save for the (probably pre-made) explosion, Megaman's spawn (which is too slow and looks more like a sped up slideshow), and 2 second tween here and there (which could be done in flash in about 3-4 mouse clicks.) Your sprites are blurry, because this isn't a .swf file. Your backgrounds are nonexistent- just a white background and an orange gradient.
It's hard to even offer constructive criticism because in doing so, that requires more effort than what you put into this, so bear with me here:

First off, ANIMATE IT! You might be able to impress elementary school students by dragging still images across the screen, but considering that can be done by anyone with even the most basic knowledge of flash; it's not going to get you anywhere here.

Add voices, lip-syncing, use the style of old movies such as Nosferatu where the text is displayed on another screen after they're animated to look like they're talking, use Microsoft Sam's voice (terrible but still better than silence); Christ, ANYTHING! What you've done here is used the text tool and wrote dialogue above the speaking character's head. Not even a speech bubble. Not even an animation of their still sprite rocking back and forth to show that they're the ones speaking. Not even a half-assed clock-styled triangle above their head as they speak.
Furthermore, often characters spoke at the same time as each other. It's just pure laziness to not even have the patience to extend their dialogue a bit and let each character have their time to talk; rather than making your audience pause the video just to know what the hell is going on.

Stop using GoAnimate. I promise you, Flash is just as simple for something of this quality; don't get me wrong, I am NOT encouraging you to keep making animations of this quality- But you've gotta start somewhere, right? Thing is, you'll at least improve with Flash. GoAnimate will always be rubbish on the other hand.

Zero stars. Anyone could replicate this in a half an hour, and that's if they took their time.
Hope you take this to heart and don't disregard criticism, if you're unable to admit that your work sucks, you'll never improve. But hey, gotta start somewhere, and you're lucky this even passed judgement.

Yet again,Spam-_-

Its not just a bag "THEN DO SOME OTHER STUFF"
Please Stop Spamming The Portal

It doesnt even teach you!

This flash is "useless" to NG
Please delete it,
It doesnt tell you how to draw him either
You draw lines and then you just say "shit,this is what it looks like,he isnt hard"
Please Put Actual Effort To Your Flashes

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ToxicDevil93~~~~~~~~~
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StagBeetle responds:

this was a joke

Hahahahahhhaha

I loled at the last bit.
WAIT!CHIEF!*BANG*Why?

Haahahahaha

Good stuff.

Is it

Pie?

LOL!!!!

This is so awesome!
NUFF SAID

Impressive...

Pivot?
Impressive.
I have to admit you ARE good at stick animating(I suck at it) But You ARE NOT Good At Madness Combat.
The Reason You Got A Zero WAS NOT Because You Didn't Credit The Creator/s Of The Sprite Pack.
It Was Because Of The Actual Animation Itself.Now That Ive Thought Of It,Your Animation Deserves About A 5-10 And 2-5(The Madness One)
I'm Recommending To "Castle Series" Colection
Have A Good Day!

~~~~~~~ToxicDevil93~~~~~~~~

ghostflames responds:

I guess that the first impression does lie :) thnx.

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