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It seems you've run into a bit of a programming error. Not sure why there's a letterbox and why that letterbox doesn't properly serve as a border. I suggest adding a dynamic camera (or vcam as some people like to call it.)

But that aside, overall for your first submission there's nothing particularly bad here, your humor is reminiscent of classic Looney Tunes-esque cartoons, which is always welcome. But you could have done more. Perhaps animated the tree a bit- have it shake or bend slightly when it's hit- or at least provide a sound effect to make it clear that it was in fact hit and not just a piece of clipart on the screen.

Adding sound in general would help this as a whole. But overall, this is a good effort- especially for a first upload here, and ESPECIALLY considering many people just start off with submitting barely watchable one on one stick figure fights.

I look forward to seeing more from you.

Haahahahaha

Good stuff.

Is it

Pie?

LOL!!!!

This is so awesome!
NUFF SAID

Impressive...

Pivot?
Impressive.
I have to admit you ARE good at stick animating(I suck at it) But You ARE NOT Good At Madness Combat.
The Reason You Got A Zero WAS NOT Because You Didn't Credit The Creator/s Of The Sprite Pack.
It Was Because Of The Actual Animation Itself.Now That Ive Thought Of It,Your Animation Deserves About A 5-10 And 2-5(The Madness One)
I'm Recommending To "Castle Series" Colection
Have A Good Day!

~~~~~~~ToxicDevil93~~~~~~~~

ghostflames responds:

I guess that the first impression does lie :) thnx.

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